This seemed rather good. However the display would need improving slightly. Its not 100% pure visual with the disturbance.
Work on it!
Work on the drawing. And dont use music thats longer than the flash its self.
You need to learn to draw. Otherwise doing these comic style flashs will fail horrible. Also dont use that mario music in a comic. Never!
Not so bad...
Its not bad or great. Infact the level design is rather plain and it makes me feel like i'm playing donkey kong or mega man instead. Which is rather a let down. The only good thing about the game is the enemies. The hazards and the main character. The rest of it is just plain boring. Including the music.
Its been done before...
I've seen many of these games before and that is the reason why I have rated you a 2. Mostly because there is no music. The only reason you have gained 2 stars is for mainly because the level design seems to be of good standard and that I am not a horrible person. However if you want this game to stand out against the others and for me to give you a higher rating include some god damn music! Otherwise this game gets dead boring and shit straight away...
I would give you a 10 for this mostly because I rarely see any games that can be interesting towards me. However even though this would work good for the female gender it seems to be rather fun for men including. I could recomend adding a score board into the game to make it a little bit more fun and to add a better reason on why the game needs to be completed. However I did find a certain flaw in the game. If I was to say swing the cursor from side to side like a general nut case I could easily complete this game. Other than that its perfect and that it fits into its own catagory. Well done.
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